jet's backstory ch.4

Jet swiftly turned around and trudged forward.Tears began to fill in his eyes.He couldn't hold them back knowing Delila wasn't safe.He knew Derek would do terrible things to her.He just didn't know what.One tear after another ran down his cold cheeks.He quickly wiped them away and sniffed.His feet numbed even more.The snow stuck to his feet and it hurt him.But he kept going he knew he could save her if he kept going.
     Later he had arrived at a coffee shop.When he walked in it felt so great.His feet were throbing but now were thawing out.He stared around embracing the warmness around him.There was a shiny,and polished wood floor beneath him.Above him were dozens of glowing lights.He felt so cozy in there.He could smell the coffee and heard the little conorsations going on around him.He walked up to a small family of pichus,riachus,and pikachus.
"uh hello there.have you seen a gengar with a nine-tails anywhere around here?" he stammered as he held back tears as he thought some more.
"um no sir we haven't but I overheard those kind people over there talking about a creepy guy with a young lady." Spoke one of the raichus.
"thank you so much."Jet went on as little tears formed.
      He slowly walked to another small family,but with different pokemon.it was a family of 3.He asked them where Derek had gone and left the comfort of the coffee shop.
"through Hurricane Cove huh?"Jet wondered aloud.
   Jet was trying to get used to the freezing weather but wasn't working out.his feet froze up again and he had fallen into the snow face first twice already.He was cold,sick,and depressed.He was pretty miserable if you ask me.He kept on trudging onward for his love.He was truly loyal.He would not forget her he wanted to show Derek who's boss and to bring Delila to safety.It was really late and he was almost to Hurricane Cove and needed a place to stay.He had no idea what so ever.He then glanced up to a tree with the most leaves than any other around.He then sprinted to the tree and grasped it.He slowly and carefully made his way up the tree.His fingers jabbing into the tree were growing red and painful.When he reached a branch big enough to lay on he jumped onto it and groaned in pain.He let out a sigh and quivered as he layed down on his stomach letting his arm hang off and one under his head.He closed his eyes and drifted off to sleep.But still worried about Delila he didn't  exactly have the best sleep ever.