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Jet's Backstory ch.1

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It was a cold winter morning but that didn't stop Jet.He didn't care how cold it was outside he loved to sit outside at the same old redwood tree everyday.He'd look over the hill it sat apon and there would be a lake.By now it was frozen and there were kids all over it.He let out a sigh as he saw his breath swirl around in the air he noticed a small snowflake fall to his nose.He chuckled as he watched it melt.He sat up and walked back into his house.
    As jet walked into his house he just couldn't help to smile as he heard the sound of playing children.He walked into the living room and lit the fireplace.He let out a sigh and sat down on the couch.He sat there and started to think about Delila.Delila is Jet's best friend but has had a crush in her for quite sometime now.His thoughts were broken by a splat on the window.He turned around to a splat snowball on the window.Outside the window were two kids.One tall boy oshawott wearing mittens,a scarf,and boots.The other was a girl mincinno.Wearing the same things but in pink.They stood there looking into the window hoping Jet didn't notice but he did.
    "hey mister we're sorry!we didn't mean to hit your window!"the girl called out.
"yeah we didn't mean it!"the boy echoed."
Jet could here their muffled voices from outside.So he got up and opened the door.
"haha oh its fine." He said staring into the children's eyes.He couldn't help to notice the girl's eyes were a radiant blue.Eyes that reminded him of Delila.
"ehem…anyway you kids best get back down that hill."
he said trying not to sound like Delila was standing infront of him.
"okay mister!" they called out together.
As they went down the hill Jet went back inside with one thing on his mind.Calling Delila.He has been wanting to ask her out on a date but he has been to busy and nervous.Jet picked up his shiny,black phone and diled in her number.The sound of his cellphone was the onlything you could here.It was completely quiet untill a voice answered the phone.
"hello?"
Jet's shiny,blood red eyes widened.He gulped.
"H-hello…"he said nervously.
"oh hey jet!" delila said cheerfully.
"H-hey D-delila I-I-I uh…w-was wondering i-if you c-could maybe…w-we could…."he stammered he just couldn't help it.
"if we could what?"she asked excited.
"I-if we could…y-you know…."he swallowed hard."i-if we could…go…out…some time?"
"well sure!I'd love to!"she yelled happily
"R-REALLY?THEN I'LL PICK YOU UP AT SEVEN 'K? he yelled excited and releived
"ok!"she said before she hung up.
He sighed as he fell backwards onto the couch.He couldn't believe he had finally asked her out.He was more pumped than ever.He stood up and ran outside.
"YAAAAAAAAAAAHOOOOOO!!!!" he screamed to the top of his lungs.
He ran around in the snow leaving all kinds of pawprints.He fell backwards and daydreamed for a bit then sat up.He needed to get ready to go.
     A couple hours past and he was finally infront of her door.He nervously lifted his hand and pressed the door bell.The door opened to a beautiful,tall nine-tails.Her teeth were so bright and shiny it could blind you.Sparkly,radient,blue eyes.Wearing a black dress and black highheels.
"well lets go!"she giggled excitedly.
"where to?"jet said staring at her in awe.
"hmmm…how 'bout that place down the street?"she said blinding jet with her smile.
"sure yeah!"he said smiling back at her.
Jet practically skipped to the car,he was so happy.He opened the car door and buckled himself in.He waited for Delila to get ready.He wanted to speed but he knew not to so he drove at a normal speed.When they arrived his heart was racing.Sweat ran on his forehead.They walked inside and took a table.They picked up their menus and began looking for what to eat.Jet pretty much used it to hide his face.
whew first chapter done.hope ya like it!
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pacificthehedgehog's avatar
Very interesting and good description, but a t try to stick to one thought for a little longer, take every detail you can about landscape, house, temperature, animal life, everything and put it in. It makes your writing seem much more professional.